All Comments on 'Lucky Alex Ch. 08'

by sandy_rock

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Lions86Lions86over 2 years ago

i dont understand why you didnt just make this story one chapter with multiple parts. this is a good story but way way too short. it all happens too fast too every chapter is boom boom boom boom over. this happens that happens then this happens ok chapter over.

GyhyGyhyover 14 years ago
I loved it.

I really enjoy this story and I like you short chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story

Good story , do not be discouraged by the person who left the bad feedback.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
one paragraph at a time

you wasted all this time and we missed the story.teasing stories are for kids.write like an adult.

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