All Comments on 'Lucky Man Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Damn!

Damn MC, this chapter, particularly the last segment where Stacy just leaves Danielle limp as a dishrag, is one of the hottest chapters in all of your stories. And that says a lot. Still hope to see some Molly Dana and/or Becky Rachel action. Actually, it just seems like it may have already happened off stage, we just aren't aware of it yet. Especially Becky Rachel. Hot. Hot! HOT! I wish I could give it a deserving ten, but five will have to suffice.

lovemesomephillylovemesomephillyalmost 5 years ago
Worth the wait

Loving this story, always incredibly hot and this chapter is no different

BillH27284BillH27284almost 5 years ago
The Rule

The rule of not fucking strangers was at odds with Kelley fucking her bosses at work. Otherwise, hot.

UsuallyPresentUsuallyPresentover 4 years ago
Awesome & hilarious

Just how many porn plots did you jam together in that filming scene?

- Husband getting revenge on cheating couple mfm

- Friends sharing a cock

- Girl cheating on bf due to porn star dick temptation

- Voyeurs getting busy

- young pussy for skilled older cock

Did I miss any? Impressive writing and sexy as hell

CZOFTWCZOFTWover 3 years ago
A little disappointing

You let Duncan steal Kelly's scene at the photoshoot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Poly?

Duncan and Kelly need to open up to the ability to love more than one person, and build a polyamourous family with Rachel, Kara, Danielle and the waitresses. Also, move Kara in or subsidize her rent, unless she likes working at Double D’s

vanyevanyeover 1 year ago

Kelly should have brought up Kara to Duncan at this point.

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