All Comments on 'Lucky Nephew'

Dude, your work is filled with run-on sentences. Something like an excited adolescent would babble on about. Make use of an editor.

You should at least take care of yourself in the same room. Was there a no touch rule I missed? Four unused holes to love, no mouths, and you use the bathroom? The reason he is recently divorced is because he is afraid to touch a woman.

I was hoping the build up would include actual sex, but maybe a sequel taking place the next morning could work? You could have him "rape" them.

Wonderful start but continue please