All Comments on 'Lucy and John'

Loved this!!!

Please continue this couples story!

@Negamerguy, thanks for the positive comments!

It was my first submission so wasn't sure how it might be received. I'd love to continue their story. I'll start working on it :-)

Delicious story, please continue!

What a story, had me leaking like a faucet almost from the start. I loved how their resolve not to touch just kind of evaporated as the lust built up. The progression of their passion and willingness to try different things was the best I could have asked for, fantasy fulfilled.

Not to shabby for a first time submission as it gets five stars from me. It will be interesting to see how this plays out in the next chapter. Thanks

Thank you so much. I love the slow build to an awesome climax. You nearly ran the gamut of oral possibilities without anything ever getting too weird. More please.

Beautifully done and exciting. More, please. John especially is such an interesting cum-eating, piss-drinking character.

Thanks all for your kind words and support. I'm working on a follow up, but am crazy busy at work. I'll get to it though :-)

I'm inspired to go back to drinking my pee. I do love it. I loved this story and how things escalated. The exchange of piss and cum is so erotic and intimate. I hope to see more.

OMG i absolutly loved it. you actually dont need a job, hell you are a writer. drinking a womans piss has only been my greatest fantasy, but your story so good, i wanted to be introduced to lucy, lol, this is my first comment ever. please keep writing, you definitely have the talent

Well thought out, and written. Don't stop now !!!

Definitely made for a continuation.

Thanks again to you all for your comments and encouragement. I finally got around to writing down the continuation I had in my head. I've submitted it and hopefully it is published soon.

erotic and kinky

Whow, just whow…. Thank you.

Five star, hot and erotic story. Fetishes fully fulfilled.