by riderofdragons
Thanks again to you all for your comments and encouragement. I finally got around to writing down the continuation I had in my head. I've submitted it and hopefully it is published soon.
Well thought out, and written. Don't stop now !!!
Definitely made for a continuation.
OMG i absolutly loved it. you actually dont need a job, hell you are a writer. drinking a womans piss has only been my greatest fantasy, but your story so good, i wanted to be introduced to lucy, lol, this is my first comment ever. please keep writing, you definitely have the talent
I'm inspired to go back to drinking my pee. I do love it. I loved this story and how things escalated. The exchange of piss and cum is so erotic and intimate. I hope to see more.
Thanks all for your kind words and support. I'm working on a follow up, but am crazy busy at work. I'll get to it though :-)
Beautifully done and exciting. More, please. John especially is such an interesting cum-eating, piss-drinking character.
Thank you so much. I love the slow build to an awesome climax. You nearly ran the gamut of oral possibilities without anything ever getting too weird. More please.
What a story, had me leaking like a faucet almost from the start. I loved how their resolve not to touch just kind of evaporated as the lust built up. The progression of their passion and willingness to try different things was the best I could have asked for, fantasy fulfilled.
Not to shabby for a first time submission as it gets five stars from me. It will be interesting to see how this plays out in the next chapter. Thanks
@Negamerguy, thanks for the positive comments!
It was my first submission so wasn't sure how it might be received. I'd love to continue their story. I'll start working on it :-)