All Comments on 'Lucy Hudson'

Would love to see this storyline continue!!!!!!!

I typically do not read BDSM. This was very interesting and an enjoyable read!

beautifully done enjoyed the feeling it gave me.

Please keep this story going... It has all the right parts caring, loving, and submission

Loved it keep it going

I sincerely hope you tell us about further adventeres of the two of them. I really enjoyed the premise of the story as I have a newly learning sub and not that experienced myself and the plot intrigues me.

Second chapter under construction.

This was without a doubt, one of the best stories on this site or anywhere! Perfect balance , pace, narration , character dialogue, character development and smart writing! Definitely all 8 cylinders where during in sync with this literary engime!! I lean more towards stories that are heavier in dialogue than narration both in my own work and those of others. I find that (in my humble opinion) the reader has a better opportunity to get to know the character through dialogue than endless pages of narration- not to say it's not necessary- it is but too many writers fall victim to over descriptive narration. I've painfully slugged through pages of narration in other stories for every two sentences of dialogue which I always found it distracting, The intimacy was perfect, loved the older man/ younger intelligent independent woman coupling and how true and necessary it is to fly under the radar in order to enjoy one owns special brand of kinks! Also enjoyed how each were physically written to be "normal" and not owners of god like physical endowments (not everyone can be a modelbor porn star / Brad Pitt handsome ) . It adds value to the story ! Five stars to be sure! Please consider continuing with this story! There is a wealth of characters and scenes with the potential to make this a multi chapter endeavor with so many possibilities (including a showdown between her master who suddenly takes offense at her branching out and how he intervenes and offers her an alternative choice which could include his friends at the bar!)

I'd love to talk to you more about it!

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Best regards,

Ray

A superb story,beautifully written!!!!

Please keep writing,you have such a beautiful mind and wonderful imagination!!!!!!

Regards and love,

Lindsay Gilmour.

A different take on bdsm. Beautiful and brilliantly written. Another chapter required on next Friday

One of your best! And that is saying something. The back and forth of the character's conversations was masterfully written and the passion rose with each interaction. As usual I agree with all your fans that a further exploration of these characters is desirable and necessary.