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All Comments on 'Lucy the UK Slut'

by skinnyboy38

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Marry her!

You have found he slut of your dreams.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
You changed pronouns!

You changed from talking about your night with Lucy but switched halfway to the first person view . Super annoying! I couldn't finish your story since the change drove me nuts!

skinnyboy38skinnyboy38about 11 years agoAuthor
pro nouns

yes, that is a bad habit of mine....luckily i have recently found an awesome editor...i will re submit....

weepingangel88weepingangel88about 11 years ago
Lucky Lucy

I like this story a lot... I find myself being envious of Lucy! Lucky gal Sir!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Pedantic comment

It's "my mate and I", not "me and my mate". Sorry if you think I"m picky, but the phrase just shouts at me every time I read it...apart from this there was some great stuff in the story!

Butterflies512Butterflies512about 11 years ago
Yes.

Lost count of how many times I came during this story...

catlady64catlady64about 11 years ago

I want to be Lucy....

LucyNLucyNalmost 11 years ago
Oh dear

This could get those of us called Lucy a bad name

skinnyboy38skinnyboy38almost 11 years agoAuthor
LucyN

Oh Lucy. You never know. Maybe this story was written just for you. I heard that it is something you would enjoy.....

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I barfed in my mouth

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A sensual guy....more interested in saying hi than being rude...I can be dirty, I can be clean....chat with me and you will see what I mean....