All Comments on 'Lucy's Story: Riding Home'

What a load of shite

1* for dragging it out to three pages

I got as far as half of page one n was bored already, ive read shite before but three pages of it !!

I honestly can't make heads or tails out of this story,I mean the whole outcome was like Brother being pissed he had to spend 3 hours with his Mom and Sister shopping and ignoring them,and finally Mom gets pissed because her Son is pretending like she doesn't exist,so she yells at him.But eventually Bro and Sis finally go at it in the van,and he gives her a glazed doughnut facial.

So my point is what the fuck kind of reasoning would lead a brother and sister to fuck like rabbits while going home?.Obviously this story was just more about sex between siblings but the point of having a good story is a decent plot to understand what it all meant instead of just,arguing,being pissed off,and then sex.

So in conclusion this story has decent sex,but very poor execution to understand,so I give this 3***.