All Comments on 'Luke & Lanie's Story'

Both of your stories are nicely written. A true shame that this one had to end. So many ways for it to go. Brother/sister, father/daughter, mother/son, mother/daughter. The list could go on.haha I do hope you will continue to write and make incest your genre of choice. You could make your stories a bit longer, give me a chance to cum along with your characters.

Wish you could be my sister. I identified with Luke all through the story. Did you identify with Lanie?

I have always wanted a hot and sexy sister that would eventually be mine in so many ways! This story is a really good one and it shows the love between a brother and xixter!

Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us!

Thankyou for a very well written story, and for re-kindling exciting, and pleasant memories.

Brian.

I really enjoyed this! Super good job!

a real shame they didn't continue atleast once in a while it would have been a much better story

Story started great and then "petered out".

I really enjoyed this!

good but the endding ruined it why couldn't they keep fucking aleast once in a while seems a little unrealistic that her freinds just happen to want her to move in with them only days after they screw it seems like it was a setup

Started out great, but left much to be desired. Just skipped over the continuing exploring and went to a quickly in the kitchen and then no more? Should have developed the steps to the final sexual experience. Also, "Why a quickie in the kitchen?" You have build up a caring relationship and just ended it? Also, why not bring the room mates into a learning experience for her brother. Got me hard, but left me soft.

awesome story it had my cock pretty hard

but it lacked structure

I like it

she just proved she didn't really love him or care about him and was just using himlike most women do

Longer might have been better.

just another use'm and leave'm story with no real love total waste of time and space.