All Comments on 'Luke and Lelia Ch. 01'

Hahahahaha!!

All those wimp husbands should learn from Luke on how to deal with a cheating slut. I'm for once am glad he kicked her out of his house with no contemplations. The nerve of her to tell him to accept her infidelity.. LOL!!

It's great to have a writer that does't demean a husband by making him a wimp.

At least so far. God how I hate that every perverted wimp thinks he is an author and has to post that shit.

Rob that was like real sad but she should have thought everything out before signing her life away like that or he could have said i`ll find another woman for myself when she finds she screwed up its to late.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

Good story so far...only problem, they are both stereotypes. She wants a big dick and he seems emotionless.

very easy to see. He is angered, disgusted, indignent, and repelled. She did just what he said she did and she knew his stand on this. It was her choice, the real emotionless one is the wife. She held no real emotions for her husband.

Short and to the point. Nice story, conversation really, but you left something out. You paint Luke's character as just and righteous but yet he knows all too well what type of person Sean is and how he operates. True, Lila was naive and stupid and did commit adultry which she knew was wrong and got what she deserved but the real crime was Sean, a person that preys on unsuspecting people to seduce and use them. His kind are like a cancer in society and should be cut out and desposed of before he can spread pain and sorrow to others. Luke, being rich and armed with the knowledge of how Sean operates would have been a prime canidate to perform the surgery. Well, maybe in Chapter 2.

A guess you can say this is one big stupid DUMB-ASS wife

It strains credulity that the wife would REALLY be that stupid. How could she not know how her husband would react. Other than that this is the right tone. NOW, knowing how this author writes, I fully expect part two etc. will screw it all up by contriving a reconciliation.

It strains credulity that the wife would REALLY be that stupid. How could she not know how her husband would react. Other than that this is the right tone. NOW, knowing how this author writes, I fully expect part two etc. will screw it all up by contriving a reconciliation.

It strains credulity that the wife would REALLY be that stupid. How could she not know how her husband would react. Other than that this is the right tone. NOW, knowing how this author writes, I fully expect part two etc. will screw it all up by contriving a reconciliation.

So I stopped reading this nonsense and rated it 1*.

if brains were dynamite she couldn't blow her nose

10 and 1/2 does exist.

at one time I though morons didn't exist but then dwornock came along.....lol

People just too often fail to think what they have when they have it -

So where could this one go ?

A bit wooden and artificial in the dialogue. Thanks for the effort.

Why are there more chapters? This one says it all. Fucking cunt. She wanted a big dick and her husbands money also. Now she has just the big dick. Maybe. Remember she's out of money. A complete tale. I'll read on anyway...

Thanks for the read.

You can and have done better than this, too canned, too trite for your talents.

The dialog is unconvincing, sounds like they don't even like each other let alone love. The could be discussing a newspaper article rather than finding out that the wife is having an affair. The characters remain two-dimensional, flat, I don't care about either one, don't really care what happens in the story. The wife is written as being so stupid I doubt she has the mental faculties to drive a car or even be trusted alone in the house with matches.

Non starter

Dumb blonde needs a 10 inch dick to satisfy her? Please. Nothing original.

....And what happens to old Sean???

What kind of stupid, deranged wife would actually tell her husband he wasn't big enough for her, and still expect to be married. I think Sean gonna get fucked up, cause based on Rob's other stories, hubby is a bad assed squid, or jarhead hero. Rob don't like Army folks enough to put them in stories. Don't care who does it, just hope Sean meets the man.

"It was only sex honey, I love only you". Those words that turn any real.man's stomach and put lots of women in the street.

Nothing new on the second read, but it reinforced the fact that she is a dumb blonde.

This is like a "Dick and Jane" early reader version of a loving wives story." See Wife cheat, Dick!" "I see wife cheat, Jane. Wife is cheating."

bobareeno’s comments cannot be improved upon - succinct, accurate and summed up my feelings perfectly - story should have been written in crayon

This is just a copy of all of the other crap that uninspired plodders dump here. You didn’t even proof read it. Why bother, I guess, because getting the names right wouldn’t make it any better.

~Yawn~

QUESTION: Are the bottles of hair dye that women use to become FAKE blondes affixed with a warning concerning usage? Something along the following: WARNING Use has been found to be detrimental to a woman's IQ. In addition, more frequent and longer term application have demonstrated a more pronounced effect on this reduction in IQ. REMEMBER you cannot attain intelligence from a bottle, but STPIDITY is readily available. Just ask the husband of any husband of s FAKE blond wife.