All Comments on 'Luna vs. Rival Ch. 08'

Really enjoying this series. I also like how regular you are with the chapters.

A little mistake I noticed: "it peeked my interest" should be "it piqued my interest". Minor thing that caught my eye.

Really good! Enjoying the series

I'm really enjoying reading your work, wish they were slightly longer can't wait to read more

I find it really cute how Luna keeps referring to Kim as her rival, when she gets her naked ass kicked by her everytime. I would think that when one person always remains fully clothed, and the other gets constantly stripped naked, humiliated, teased, spanked on her butt and made to masturbate, the rivalry is pretty much over. Kim pretty much owns Luna's ass, literally. Also, I know that Luna kind of loves Kim beacause of all the humiliation, and will miss her after high school, but I wonder if Kim herself is just plain mean, or if she actually has some positive feeling for her little naked loser.

well, Luna was Kim's rival insofar as she kind of stole her boyfriend back in the first chapter, but I kind of wager he was a lot less important to Kim later on.

As for if Kim is just plain mean, well, if that was the case, Kim's interactions with Luna wouldn't extend beyond humiliating her in public, and so seeing how Luna is implied to have slept over at Kim's many times...

Hmm, ya know, I'd love to see some snippets of other people stripping Luna, for instance, somebody demanding her top in exchange for lunch money. Not full stories, like the Vs Everyone side-series, but just little snippets to show people just starting to expect Luna to all but give away her clothing.