All Comments on 'Lunacy Edge Ch. 02'

Keep it coming - this is an excellent story and well written especially for a beginner - Props for you!

Thanks for the compliment, you can't know how great it felt to read that you like my story. i just hope i get more feedback so i can help write for the readers. I hope many of you like this and vote on it! I gave myself a 50, i didn't think it was too bad. Thanks guys!

... to read where you will lead Hailey next. Keep writing, please.

Alright sooo I just started to read it, and the first chapter actually did draw me into reading more. I would really like to see this story go somewhere and I think it has the potential of a great story. I dont know if you'd like tips or idea's...but if you do you could just ask away lol. I have lots of idea's in my head thats floating around...So I can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be looking out for it.