All Comments on 'Lunch'

Really enjoyed this! Hope there can be a part 2!

Another good story. I enjoy your work, Joe.

Completely lost all interest at 'no longer sported a full set of teeth.' Just... gross, and frankly, totally unbelievable, even for some old sick fucker's wank fantasy.

To the anonymous commenter who was grossed out by one line in my story, I'm sorry you didn't like the story, but seniors like sex too. The line you objected to is in the second paragraph; did you even read the story?

Maybe Susan could introduce her granddaughter to the dirty old man?

*****Thought this would be a good read, but it turn out to be ONE HOT AZZ READ. Damn how did I miss this one. Thanks for sharing.