All Comments on 'Lunch Time'

Kind of pointless.

Thanks for the effort.

nice twist in the tail. or should that be tale

nothing like two cucks and their whores

Not worth more

Your story was OK until your 'clever: reveal.

1* because this was for "Summer Lovin Story Contest 2014" and in this story there aren't no love, just a cheating wife...

It is hard to write a short story that can be appreciated. This is very good. Just as in the story, a quickie.

Anyone can write a good long erotic story. More writers her should try their hand at the 750 word limit.

It was a story. I guess.

I wonder if he fucks her too. Her husband must be the sharing kind of man.

daimii, I enjoyed this swift little short story. You wrote to the point and then pushed it off the cliff.

The best complement you can have as a writer are the LW BTB commentators complaints.

Not a story just a sex scene. 1 star

and it's gone

all that is left is the dust

This story had all the elements of good fiction, was well written, and exciting...the ending was wonderful and a complete surprise!!

One summer when I was a kid I worked on a "combine crew" and we harvested wheat from Texas all the way to Canada. I got a few blow jobs and more, from some of the houswives or daughters along the way!

This story brought back fond memories for me and was exciting for the wife because she has had a little extra fun with the combine crews that have come through!

I liked it! Thanks.

Was that your wife? Thought so.

I great and sexy short story! A hard working man getting pleased by his lady for lunch, sounds like something I would do.

Sam

I can see your lady bringing you lunch then offering a treat!!

for those not raised on farm, this was not too uncommon... talk to dad granddad old uncle on and on

Hopefully her husband doesn't find out or he will be buried out there along with the cheating slut.

mother gives blow jobs to the hired help? Never happened anywhere I ever worked. Must not be in Texas. Here both would be catfish food in a deep stock tank. I hate cuck stories. One star, story sucks.

Thanks for the read.