All Comments on 'Lunchtime Tryst in the Pool'

The perfect middy workout - a nooner.

Oh, yes! Pool sex….

Hot little bit of erotica for a hot summer day!

Now I am eager to take a dip in the pool….

Actually, pool sex isn't very good at all, for anyone that's actually tried it, instead of fantasizes about it. The water in the pool washes away all of the woman's natural lubrication and you end up with painful sex, especially if there is a lot of chlorine in the water, which makes it even worse and more painful for the woman.

Anon: thanks for taking the time to comment. Not a fantasy, well, the lover part is…for now, but I’ve had sex in MY pool many times. Lubrication is not at all an issue for me, on land or sea, and the pool boy manages the chlorine level well, can’t even smell it on my skin when I get out. Stop by and you can check it out for yourself 😀

Damn! That was HOT!

Love the playfulness of your characters' conversation, and the hot buildup of sexual tension, " on a timeline". You capture the essence of the " nooner" in all of its heightened, time-sensitive, " lets get at it, no worries about the neighbors...or the chlorine" rush of passion. 5*s!

Like a quick lunchtime tryst, this story appropriately get to the point. Well done. Now I wish I had a pool again...