by entirelybs
Well written!! Terrific descriptions of emotion. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I can relate to the lust and love of a Cousin I have never had the pleasure of having sex with one of my Cousins but I have lusted after several of them. Very good story, I didn't comment on the first of these two chapters because I had to read the part 2. Keep up the good story telling and writing.
Very well written.
Waiting for the next chapter in this great story.
Tenderness not often seen in incestuous relationships. So well written from beginning to end with perfect amount of progression. The description of emotions and bodies makes the reader feel part of the tale.
A lovely, well written story with strong characters. I can't wait to read more.
I love this story I shall read through to the end and hope there is a resolution that all parties can live with, including Jack's mother and sister. I feel sure that all concerned family members will need to get together at the end of the summer.