All Comments on 'Lust for a Belly Dancer'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I'm a belly dancer fan myself and was excited to read a story hear about a dancer, but I was very disappointed in this. Incredibly juvenile writing with very little substance. 1 star.

ruby77ruby774 months agoAuthor

Anonymous - Thanks for your candor, although a bit harsh. What didn't you like about the story?

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I enjoyed reading this from start to finish. The beginning caught my attention as it was hilarious and relatable and the rest of the story kept me interested as it was similar to my fantasies with belly dancers.

ruby77ruby774 months agoAuthor

Anonymous (2): Great to hear that you enjoyed it! I was going for some humor in the beginning, so I'm glad it worked for you.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Amazing!!

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Straight male who just started writing erotic stories and fantasies. Lover of bellydancers, cosplayers and thick women.