by ruby77
I'm a belly dancer fan myself and was excited to read a story hear about a dancer, but I was very disappointed in this. Incredibly juvenile writing with very little substance. 1 star.
Anonymous - Thanks for your candor, although a bit harsh. What didn't you like about the story?
I enjoyed reading this from start to finish. The beginning caught my attention as it was hilarious and relatable and the rest of the story kept me interested as it was similar to my fantasies with belly dancers.
Anonymous (2): Great to hear that you enjoyed it! I was going for some humor in the beginning, so I'm glad it worked for you.