by Jamie_in_dresses
First sentence - brilliant - powerful and we knew where we were.
Continued with knowledgeable clarity.
A simple and beautifully described sex scene without the porn.
A terrific place to stop and a perfect length for a sunny afternoon read.
Simple... 5*
It is truly refreshing to read a well written story that reaches a successful conclusion without droning on for page after page!
The older woman gets a youthful virgin boy and breaks him in with just the correct moves and juices.
You have to give us more of this. I can see so many directions it could go, one of which ought to be his deflowering Mrs. Stanton's daughter at her request, possibly dominating the girl in the process.
I thought that this is a good story, sweet in its way and well written.
I hope you add to this story, it has all the pieces for a long hot summer tale with many chapters!