All Comments on 'Lust for My Younger Cousin Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Noticed a few irregularities that you are, undoubtedly unfamiliar with in spoken English.

Stuffs, stuff nay occasionally be singular, as a verb; otherwise stuff is usually plural

Accomodative is likely not a word, accommodating is likely the word that would fit here.

We lied down on Wed lay down.

I was lying over her facing each other. Perhaps you were laying together, me on top. Over her supposes that you were literally above/not touching her.

I could go up a level more. This suggests that you have yet to have sex with her despite your later intonation that you have had sex with her.

I am trying to increase your comfort level with written English. You have succeeded in producing an interesting scene that is a bit difficult, but not impossible, to visualize.

Congratulations, please find greater adjectives with which to describe your cousin as you contribute more episodes.

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