All Comments on 'Lust in La Jolla Ch. 03'

Jeez An, its called courting!

Jerry in SW Washington State, USA - I very much enjoyed this romance starting between Jake and Jenny. Obviously, Jake is probably going to have several "contacts" with other women first, but I would be very happy if the story ended by Jake and Jenny becoming a couple. You handle your dialog and each person's thoughts very well. Dialog is often a weakness in many stories, but you write it well. I enjoyed that you used Jenny's fear of flying as a reason for their bodily contact. I look forward to the next chapter, and also look forward to Jake and Jenny getting together again, passionately.