All Comments on 'Lust in Paradise'

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Birdstheword1Birdstheword1about 5 years ago
Smells of a...

Recipe for disaster.

I would be very curious to find out what happens in a follow up story or if this became a series.

chris2300chris2300about 5 years ago
Soooo

She’s pregnant with Ryan’s child and she wants more of him, hence the flower. The next installment is in the loving wife category. As she cuckholds Chase. Unfortunately Steph doesn’t want Chase so as is usual the nerd is the one to lose it all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Oh my!

Dearest darkoverlord,

Damn. That was so, so hot! (I think my husband is going to get lucky.) Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

GG

discobobdiscobobover 3 years ago

i say,, good on connie!! fun read,,well written, well paced,,very erotic party.

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 1 year ago

The sex scenes were really good, as always, but it seemed unfinished. No conversations about feelings or desires that each couple should have had. Oh well, not my story, but it went from a 5 to a 4 in the last weak page.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Absolute TRASH

SarahwithloveSarahwithlove8 months ago

Makes me miss doing Ecstasy.

SarahwithloveSarahwithlove8 months ago

Why, in all these stories, does the MC have the smaller cock? In real life, it probably wouldn't be like that for us. It has become so transparent in these stories that I can read a couple paragraphs and totally predict exactly what will transpire. Maybe I am reading too many of these stories....hmmm. This was hot though and a bit different and I kept waiting for Jason to wake up and take them hostage. That would have been hot.

GeorgiesGeorgies8 months ago

liked it, hopes there is a suite and know what happened to Connie's bottle content

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New Writer with interest in Science Fiction , Fantasy, and Horror genres. Grew up on Godzilla and Ultraman back in the Seventies. I guess Im kind of a nerd, love Star Trek, Star Wars, Doctor Who, and watching classic 1950's sci fi movies. Got into writing on Literotica as a...