All Comments on 'Lust in the Heat'

While brief, this in NO WAY felt rushed or lacking in story content. So erotic, how you manipulated their power play. I liked you having him asking, giving her the freedom to interact or end it, at her choice. Not a fan of the "Non Consent" genre, I'm often irritated when a story turns too forceful for the situation, as is done in many B.D.S.M. stories. They lose sight of it as a "playing" with power. I look forward to reading more of your work, including your take on D/s dynamics.

Very erotic without being totally implausible. good job building the tension between them in a relatively short space of time. Good job on the sex and the struggle for power between them. Lot of potential for future chapters.