All Comments on 'Lust in the Loft'

With the style of the writing and the vivid descriptions that are given you have a good shot at the world of romance novels. The only thing you are missing is a tad bit more story. Stories that have sex in them are great. Stories that are comprised entirely of sex are only so-so. Overall great job and keep up the good work.

He should have eaten her asshole out while he was down there. I'm sure it would have tasted delicious.

I enjoyed this and number 2. Those are cousins I would love to have.