by xstories
Eva Longoria except much shorter and much older than she really is.
Beyonce and Meagan Goode except much younger than they actually are.
You're stretching suspension of disbelief right to the breaking point before you start telling the story. Then you finish it off saying Eva began a relationship with Jenifer Lopez over 25 years ago on the set of a TV show that premiered 10 years ago. That's where you lost me.
Yeah i'd say it's worth continuing, though it is a little weird how some of the celebs ages are older then they currently are in real life, it would've made more sense to have them all younger, otherwise it just gets confusing.
Aside from that though the story isn't bad, I wish it was a bit longer and more detailed but there's definitely plenty of potential here, so don't give up.