All Comments on 'Lust of The Shy'

A very good first story. I agree about English not being your first language. On the other hand, the wording and phrasing gives the story a certain charm; a foreign mystique.

My poorly worded point is, don't worry about your command of English. The spelling is superb (a pet peeve of mine) and the grammar (periods, quotation marks, and the like) is well done.

Looking forward to more installments.

One part is enough...Please!!