All Comments on 'Lux Ex Tenebris Ch. 02'

more please. keep going. you dont need an editor. keep up the good work!!!!!!

I didn't see the kidnapping coming.

Will she still have her memory when she awakes.

OMG!!!! I did not see that coming!!! You can't leave us hanging like that!! Aaaaaghhh!!! ^_^

While I never regret any of my cliffhangers I know how the readers feel now, but that is a great place to stop. Really looking forward to the next chapter :D

Damn you and the cliffhanger

You don't need an editor. Just keep writing!

Your story is amazing and I, like many others, am very sucked in!

Belial is going to get his. The King is going to de-feather him like he said he would.

You NEED an editor! Take some pride in your writing, it won't fucking kill you to get some help with the editing.

Ignore the last comment by "Anonymous" about needing an editor (that person is an asshole and very rude) because you don't need one.

Your writing and story telling is great. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

The only problem I have with this chapter...is the cliff hanger. I am so excited about this series and have really enjoyed it so far. I can't wait for the next chapter!! And ooooooo somebody's going to be feathered like a chicken!!! lol

Ever since I chanced upon the first chapter of this story, I couldn't forget it because it don't just talk about sex and stuff. The element of love in this story is so great that I look forward to your next update. No other love stories could even match up to yours. Looking forward to the 3rd chapter. :)

Great story,just not long enough and yes,,always a cliff hanger,lol,i dont see anything wrong with your writing,,keep up the good work,,,POST AGAIN SOON,PLEASE,,

5 stars! Love this story, please continue! To the first anon about editing- the author is fine without it.

SO when is the next chapter,,get us hooked and then leave us hanging like this,,just not fair,lol,,,,soon i hope???

Hello everyone,

As of now I'm still working on the 3rd chapter of this installation and I must apologize because it's gonna take a while for me to upload it -life just gets in the way. Nevertheless I have no intention in abandoning this story so stay tuned and I thank you for reading and giving feedbacks either on here or through PMs!

I thought he was going to trick her into eating the poisonous fruit. Unexpected twist. I dig that.

I think I'm your biggest fan ever! I've been waiting a really a long time for the next chapter, and every single day I go to literotica.com to see what has been updated, but I don't see any new update. D'X Waaaaah!!! Please update new chapters soon, and I wish that this was a long series because, there aren't very many really good nonhuman stories, but this could definitely be a really amazing and long series! Thanks for creating this awesome story, from your loving fan,

Cute_Hedgehog xoxo

You write very well except for mostly the verb thing, and you are getting better. Like the cliff hanger end to this chapter!