All Comments on 'Lykas: The Great Warrior Ch. 01'

Damn, that was hot! I'd have lost to him on purpose! He could use me all he wanted, and not just for the one night!

Hot characters, but you could use an editor. The changes back and forth from 1st to 3rd person was distracting and there was some wrong language usage (like mixing up fearless and fearful).

So they just finished rolling around on the ground and didn't take a good bath in his big tub? Really? Come on important things like cleanliness matters.