All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 07'

Omg I don't usually comment but omg this story is so beautifully written. Really the relationship between Leif and Lynn I portrayed so vividly. I can feel the chills and the excitement spread when I read this story. Please continue with the next installment preferably by tomorrow lol. Thanks.

Poor Lynn, her one awful experience with a guy has her thinking all men will be the same. I commend Leif for having patience with Lynn.

Amazingly written, one of the best stories on here!

You have paced this story so well that it has become intoxicating. This couple have found some wonderful things in each pother and I am enjoying the effort on your part. Yes I do expect more sex, but the sensual and loving efforts of these two make up for a lot of faster cruder efforts by others. Thank you and please keep writing.

Your story spelling is superb and it has caught my attention. I love it...***** stars

"added softly"; "whispered softly" etc. My suggestion is just to drop softly. Also, how could someone have " thin, but full lips"? And what are "husky fingers"? Isn't husky a tone of voice? I'm wondering. Otherwise, nice story!