All Comments on 'Lynn and Leif Forevermore Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love your story

You always leave me anticipating more. Cant wait for the next update.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Uh yeah!

Great job on this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

That was so hot can't wait for the next update. On really loving this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
why do your tags say black man white woman

Yeah why?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yeah

Still the annoying usage of language

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I'm tired of you using the word "little"

"Cute LITTLE ass" "cute LITTLE accent" "pretty LITTLE pussy" " sweet LITTLE clit" "sweet LITTLE clithood" "pretty LITTLE lips" "hot LITTLE pussy lips" "beige LITTLE legs" "sweet LITTLE voice". Really now, how LITTLE exactly is this woman? The number of times the word has been used in this chapter made me stop reading it after a while because I started imagining a child in his arms thanks to the description of how "little" she is :l

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