by mich80new
I have read hundreds of stories on Literotica. This chapter actuality brought me to tears and that is a rarity for me. 5 stars from this devoted reader.
It took them hurting each other for them to finally understand. Both of them are immature in their own way and still have a lot to learn.
Anybody who has ever been young and madly in love, or rather young and madly in love *and* with emotional baggage/trust issues can relate to this story and if you cant, then you have never been young and madly in love with someone.
Shoot, reading this story, its like Im 19 again....
Okay I understand love and the story was good, but Leif was wayyyyyyyyyyy to sappy in this chapter. I am glad that she fought for him, any woman worth her grain would fight hard to get a good man back when she has f'd up.
This story started off good but then it became repetitive and annoying as hell in many parts. I'm like dayum can you get the main part you keep saying over and over again then it repeats it self again and again. I have never read a story like this were the characters repeat there feelings like 3 times or more in every chapter the same dayum feelings they said the last chapter and the chapter before and most likely the chapter coming up next. It was repetitive. I had to skip half of this because I knew you say the same thing in the next 3 chapter and never move on! I can't take it my brain will explode if I continue on. Adios!