All Comments on 'Lynne - My Stepdaughter Pt. 02'

'your' = possession. Your car, your home, etc

'you're' is a short version of 'you are'.

A little confusing, since he's treating her like a virgin and she's not. Also why the sneaking around? They're not re later so nothing illegal is taking place.

I would have given it 5 stars if not for the grammatical errors. You keep writing "your" when you really meant "you're", the abbreviation for "you are".

I could not finish reading this story. It is riddled with grammar that looks like a 3rd grader would write. The story is good, but the bad grammar and omissions just caused it to keep going off course for me. 2 stars, and thank you for your genuine effort.

'Wildbill

You need an editor, storylines are good. Reach out to the Literotica community for an editor. 4/5

Great story! So I gave 5 stars, but grammar and contents I.e. legally not his daughter so no need to sneak. Otherwise loved it.