All Comments on 'Lyzzie’s Mom Buys Her Lingerie'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This screams for a sequel! At the end they are in the position for a scissoring. Would be fantastic to see that happen!

mommysnaughtymommysnaughtyover 1 year ago

this was one hot story I can relate to it hope you write more like it or add more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don't put a period after a question mark or exclamation point. Also, when you do use a period, you're supposed to put it before the quotation marks, not after.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Next stop, the toy store, and daddy will be away for a weekend long golfing trip…

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