All Comments on 'Mable's Breasts Pt. 11'

What a great, wonderful story. Loved, loved Chapter 11, this ending was over the top. Thank you.

Great story. Thank you very much!!

LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!! LOVED IT !!!

My absolute favorite series on Literotica!!!

I will miss the series but loved the conclusion !!!!

Loved it! One of the best series on the site!! If I could have given it 10 stars, I would have. Bravo!

Very good. Well written. Enjoyed the whole series.

Look forward to your next story.

Loved this whole series. It was very provacative and sexy. It kept my attention and i could hardly wait for the next episode. It ended in a very nice way and did not leave you hanging.

I loved your series tremendously. Was so glad I opened the literotica site on Valentines Day . Great treat. Job well done .

G.

All parts of the 11 chapters held the attention.

Really enjoyed all parts. CONGRATULATIONS GREAT

READ. I will read anything you write

BW

You wrote a very captivating and interesting story. Keep up the awesome work.

I couldn't wait for each and every chapter. I was looking under the new stories daily to find the latest (and concluding) chapter. Very well done. I thoroughly enjoyed the entire story. Continue the great work!

I thoroughly enjoyed all of this series. Your writing skill is fantastic and how the characters developed throughout was captivating. Keep up the great work!

I fell in love with this story after chapter 1 and voraciously read the subsequent chapters. The love Jimmy and Mable had for each other I could feel through your masterful writing. The sex was hot and steamy but not cheap to dishonor their love. Although I hate to see it end, the way you did it brought the perfect closure to the series. I look forward to your future offerings as you have set a standard of writing that few on Lit can ever achieve. Thank you!

An awesome series and a great finale. Really liked it. You kept all the characters in the story and tied it all up in this final installment. The amount of time from part 10 was concerning as I wondered if you had come up against a wall creatively. Glad to see you made it through. Looking forward to the next great series. Thanks

I lived in the Coeur d' Alene area for six years and could picture them plainly!! Terrific story that I was afraid had run it's course in Ch. 10, but the final chapter was perfect! Nice ending to a very well-done story!!

There are times when I don't want to see such a great story like this one end but if you must, at least it ended on a very high note.

The only quibble I have is that, instead of implying it, if you actually had Jim say something to the effect of "...and we lived happily forever after."

Oh well.

For what it's worth, I'll miss them.

This is probably the best series I've read on here ever. Really good work mate. Your writing style really gives the reader a feel for the characters and also allows to dig deep in following along with their lives and their story. Top Stuff. Keep up the excellent work.

Great series and loved the ending. Thank you!

Thank you for your time and effort creating this story. Also the happy ending! X

Many thanks for crafting a wonderful story and carrying it through without jumping the shark. As it went along, I lived in dread that it would succumb to the common Literotica path of topping itself by bringing in incest, unrelated fetishes, and all the rest. Thank God you held it back to just lactation, family nudism, and Evelyn as a minor side story.

Very well done, with emotional depth and exceptional eroticism. Granted, Mable was kind of the ultimate fertility goddess, with a propensity for tearing up at the drop of a hat, but that just added to her charm.

Beautiful series.

Thank you for such a heart warming passionate story. I thoroughly enjoyed.

Thank you for such a heart warming, passionate story. I truly enjoyed it.

I do believe this was the most heartwarming series I have ever found on Literotica. I especially like the happy was it ended up for everyone. Thank you very, very much

Absolutely outstanding work! Loved reading this series :)

Well done, a really nice feel good story worthy of 5 stars.

Dear Jaymie , What a FABULOUS Read ! So sad that I`ve come to the end . You`ve combined great story telling with an Erotic content , Brilliant penmanship ! THank You .

I really enjoyed this, well written, a real page turner but ... I was expecting Mabel and Leslie to get it on together after Leslie broke up with John, Mable comforting Leslie and ... well you know how it goes.

And then perhaps a threesome - Mable, Leslie and Jamie - keeping it in the family!

If you ever do rewrite Pt. 11 do let me know!!!!

Wonderful story. I really felt apart of the story and felt a kinship with the characters. I was glad for the happy ending.

This was a great story. Cold have also been in the Novel category. Thank you for writing it.

I really got into this story and was hoping it would never end. I felt like I was part of this somehow. The ending was awesome and brought a tear to my eye...such a nice happy ending.

Truly a work of art and I truly thank you for a marvelous story.

THAT was a fabulous story from beginning to end. Erotic and empathetic and also somewhat believable. A tour de force.

Once I started reading, I couldn't stop.

A magical story arc. Gorgeously written. Just beautiful from beginning to end.

This was an amazing and wonderful story which I loved reading!

Lovely story, one of the best. Love from Norway

I loved it, and imagined the movie at the same time! Too bad the porn industry does not strive for the artistic side of the art anymore...

@ Anonymous...I couldn't agree more.

I love it. Although erotic there is a great plot and almost believable. Your writings are very much apricated and I look forward to reading further creations of yours. 10 Stars!!

Fantastic stories mate

I've read many stories on here and this and one other are by far my favorites.

What a beautiful love story, so well crafted and great character development. I think your style of writing is so smooth, like a good whisky with an easy and engaging flow to the story and pleasantly palatable. Thanks for writing and sharing. You know that you have read a great story when there is so much nostalgia after reading!!!

ive read literotica for many years,this has been a joy to read. well written, well concieved. very sexy,erotic. thank you 10 stars

I read this entire story in one sitting. I refrained from commenting on the individual chapters so that I could give an opinion on the the ouevre. I found it compelling reading and thoroughly enjoyed it. 5**** all the way through. Thank you Jaymie_dee, your efforts are much appreciated.

I loved the entire story. Please keep writing. You are so talented.

absolutely brilliant story iloved it being a big breast lover i totally got the feel of it it says 5 stars i think 10 is more honest over 11 chapters it never waned & only got better brilliant !!!!

good long and sexy thanks

Even if Mable is not the type of woman I usually go for, and James is a bit too young for my liking to be able to find myself in him, the story is still one of the best I've read here so far : An absolute "slow burner", very well developed and narrated, moreover very tasteful and without "extravagances", which in doubt are often rather unattractive, even disgusting.

I am rarely enthusiastic, but in this case I am, the more so because after the first pages of this series I was almost ready to abandon the reading because of the circumstances described at the beginning - I'm glad I didn't do that !

5/5 stars !

The story is awesome and exceptionally well written. I found this to be the best I have read on this site and I have read many. Very well done. Please keep writing. I plan to read all your work.

the whole 11 part series is so well written its a 11 out of 10 for me well satisfying story with a real flow to the story from start to finish so well thought out & planned to perfection !!! reall well done sir / madam this is my firm favourite on literotica with another story coming a close second a hairs breath between mables breasts & goodness gracious me congratulations to you !!!!!

Loved it very much, it progressed nicely!

Damn good stuff! That was my weekend, just reading, I couldn't stop. Thank you so much.