All Comments on 'Mad Clown Ch. 01'

you said "where's body armor" the correct spelling is "wears body armor". Where denotes a place or location.

Who's is the correct spelling of the contraction for who is, for the possessive term the correct way is whose.

In spoken language they are identical, in writing not.

you said greats. the word is greets. I don't think greats means anything.

Suddenly... Tentacles! Was not expecting that, but okay. :) Also, not exactly sure what the mad clown is/looks like...

I am so intrigued ..please continue..

Joline is a rare name these days. Takes me back to 7th and 8th grade she preferred Rose though. Sorry 4 babeling good story can't wait 4 more

Dude what the fuck

Beautifully written nd thoughful

Good does prevail over evil. Would like to know more about the Clown, though. He sound like the sort of being that could be put to good (as in very good) uses......