All Comments on 'Madame Secretary Meets the Mrs.'

Too many errors. You need an editor to help remove the typos and the annoying changes from past to present tense in the same paragraph. The dialogue could also use a bit of a lift.

Sorry, but I was unable to finish the story as the mistakes were too off putting.

Total fantasy, if the husband has this much luck he needs to buy a ticket for every lottery, then work out how he will spend the trillions he is sure to win, love it.