All Comments on 'Maddie'

sorta misleading.

A promising premise, but would have been a better story with more detailed sex.

Erotic Couplings? Sure, but not this category.

I think people forget that this category fits two different categories. This isn't incestz and the writer knew that. Just wish readers would learn that Taboo stories (ex: Fucking your ex's sister) also fit in here.

As for the story, I may not be the best one to judge, but this seems rushed. I suggest writing when you're not stroking/rubbing one out.

Great story. Elle's post !!!!!

Hey kids, this is a taboo story and not incest. I believe I classified it correctly.

- Baz

I'd love to read a more drawn out version of this. Even if it was a quickie it was to quick.

This could be cute

Don't see how fucking her is taboo unless it's some kind of bros before hos thing but for girls.

A fun story. It doesn't take itself too seriously.

Too many authors here see themselves as budding Hemmingways, over impressed with their writing, come on people...these are just soft dirty stories.

So, to all them, I'll say "Lighten up Francis".

Happy this author is not one of those guys it doesn't hurt I grew up in Kansas City.

that's two that I've read and enjoyed