All Comments on 'Maddie Ch. 01-08'

So,you never ate that sweet pussy ? SMH

Great story. Please keep it evolving!

A bit like the curate's egg........good in places. A good attempt for a first time but the story lacked a smooth flow. Several typo's........you either need to re-read your story or get an editor to help. Hope this help's you to improve as there is definitely promise there.