All Comments on 'Made in Death's Image 02'

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MaverickX over 2 years ago

Not bad. Definitely felt pretty rushed. I'm still hooked on the story and can't wait for 3 but maybe take your time for the next chapter. Alot of stuff happened in this without any explanation or buildup and it was a few pages shorter than part 1 so it left alot to be desired. Definitely gonna be overly impatient for Part 3.

jra13 over 1 year ago

Scurrying. I LOL'd at that one. Scrying. Scurrying is what lil mice do, they scurry around.

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