All Comments on 'Made to Obey Ch. 08'
by madetoobey
- 7 Comments
Anonymousalmost 5 years agowhy is he still there time to pack your bags tell your brother what that slut wife ad her family are doing to you and move out of the city go far away there is always work somewhere else you don't nee those bitches
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoCarl it is time to get out and far far away. You will always be subservient to those bitches. Man up and get out now. By the way the writer is a sadistic person no MAN would submit to this.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoone picky point: I thought carl was sleeping in the spare room, where is he gonna sleep if esther is in there?
madetoobeyalmost 5 years agoAuthorTheir house has more than one spare bedroom (although Carla's is no longer spare). Apologies for not explaining this in the body of the story. Thanks
Anonymousover 2 years agoI would of left after the first 2 pictures . No money is worth that shit . I know it’s just a story but each next chapter is getting worse along with the spelling.
madetoobeyover 2 years agoAuthorTo recent anonymous commentor. "I would of left after...". This ought to be "I would HAVE left..." Very poor, slovenly grammar but maybe English isn't your first language.
Anonymous7 months agoA very adroit bit of writing, regardless of the subject. Very professional with a subtle awareness of the deeper human concerns beneath. I shall surely begin any list of ‘ favorite authors’ with this one.
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