All Comments on 'Madeleine's Glory'

by MisterGordonslittlegirl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting. There's a lot to Aunt Maddy; maybe something with Madeleine's father?

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

Learn how to write correctly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That. Was. Awesome! Please do continue.

Dewey Cheatham

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would like to see this continued

Thor69269Thor69269over 1 year ago

Great start. Can't wait for next part. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Please continue.

They really need to get together. And make love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well done! Definitely needs more.

MisterGordonslittlegirlMisterGordonslittlegirlover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Dewey. Yes Anonymous, Aunt Maddy is an interesting lady and leader in the coming of age sexual revolution. I write. As. I please. Charles Bukowsky is my late word-husband.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

You have a million miles to walk before you can consider yourself in the same building as a writer, let alone even an imagined relationship. You write as you please, which is badly. Writing badly isn't writing, it's typing. You type.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it.

MisterGordonslittlegirlMisterGordonslittlegirlover 1 year agoAuthor

Ok lets read your writings then. Oh, you don't have any? Shocking. šŸ¤­šŸ˜†

MisterGordonslittlegirlMisterGordonslittlegirlover 1 year agoAuthor

Cageysea9725 is a creepy stalker.

Candi_SwallowsCandi_Swallowsabout 1 year ago

This needs a continuation of the story! The sexual awakening of the daughter by her father & her Aunt! Love the aunt, love the writing.

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Hello. I'm back with a new account. Forgot the info to the last account but many of you really enjoyed reading my past daddy story. And I really enjoyed writing it. I have many more stories to tell. I look forward to hearing if you think they're jerk-worthy or not. xo