All Comments on 'Madison's Bikini'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
PROOF READ!!!!

"... had this hole love hate stereotypical sibling ..." - WHOLE!!

".. Her barley there baby blue string bikini ..." - BARELY!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
spell

I so agree. Mis spelling is distracting and amateurish.

MoonlightCatMoonlightCatover 11 years ago
enjoyed it

...Well except that proof read thing,that was hot.;)

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