All Comments on 'Maeve'

You use the name Maeve for your lead character and go on to give the Irish meaning for the name. The spelling you use is one of the English spellings of this name, if it was the Irish version of this name you wanted to use it should have been spelled Meabh, the BH being pronounced as a V sound as there is no letter V in the Irish language. Sorry for the rant but I'm Irish and a fluent speaker and seeing things like this annoys me slightly.

That said it was a great story and much better written than anything I personally have attempted so i hope you keep up the good work.

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