All Comments on 'Mage and Consort Pt. 01'

Good

great story and fantastically done! Thanks for creating and sharing

I like both of these characters, and their very human failings. I look forward to reading more.

I almost skipped reading this but thought I'd give it the benefit of the doubt.

Boy am I glad I did!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

This kind of reminds me of another unfinished story, I enjoyed this very much and look forward to the rest.

Very good. I'm really getting into this one. Please continue!

Holy SHIT this drags on.

I like the story.

I find it well written.

It would be nice to see it continue.

The next chapter is not linked to this this one .

It is on the stories page but not here.

How do you train to fuck for years, but still suck this bad? These mages need to fuck certain guys, who may or may not have magical potential of their own?, and get creampied in order to grow their powers, but they handle it in such a frigid way. They're effectively a society of magical cumsluts, but they refuse to embrace it. Probably to avoid being known as the Coven of Cumsluts. It seems counter-productive.

cool story i hope you make more like this

Unity and Destiny is an incredible book..... (The strangness within is quite good in it's own right as well) was so shocked i couldn't find either of them published or even hosted anywhere besides on here. The world needs that series!

I'm not into yours in the same way... I'll keep reading in case the storyline, character arcs and world building gets more complex.... Right now it's a simple story and there's not much to sink are teeth into.... The two books I mentioned are world class... Especially the sequel.