All Comments on 'Maggie May - Jake Rivers'

Been done before but a good story is a good story.

Kudos - well done.

Adrian

Jake, this was a wonderful tale leading up to just the kind of happy ending that I love. They will, deservedly, live happily ever after. Thanks, Pete.

You have done another good romance with, to me, a wonderful period mode to boot. You and DG do a great job with the Romance category but please don't forget to do other genres as you do that well also.<P>Thank you for the entertainment.<P>PT

You have another winner here. I can honestly say I don't know another writer who writes detail as well as you. Most readers probably don't know that the places you write about in your stories are real and the details are true.

Anyway, another fine story by a truly talented author.

Highest Regards.

DG Hear

Once again you have transported me to a place that i can touch from your descriptions. A fine romantic tale and a real winner. Glad you are back and doing better with the knee. Take care and thanks for another winner.

Jake

Loved the story, but as the title says, definitely not our Maggie. Take it from a real scouser (born in Liverpool) the real Maggie May was not a nice person at all. Not only was she a prostitute, but she was also a thief. While she was entertaining her clients her partner would steal the clients clothing etc. In fact Maggie was caught actually pawning one clients effects. After her resulting trial, she was sentenced to transportation, I believe to Australia and in the words of the song, "she never walked down Lime Street any more"

Bob T

That showed how the good in people can shine forth when it seems to have been lost.

And happy with the tolerance most f us lack -

Nice -

I enjoyed it a lot. The only problem I had with it was the ending. I mean, the story was rolling along, progressing nicely, and then,,,WHAM!!!. It was Over. Done. Fini! It felt like I just drove my truck into a concrete wall just to get it stopped. Oh well, there’ll be other stories, I guess.

Beautiful story!

A little bit on the old side but lovely