All Comments on 'Maggie's Pizza Delivery Job'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved it

Maggie obviously like's getting made airtight. Would love to order pizza from her place.

She clearly delivers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Much Better

I've read the "original" but your version is much hotter and better

CityWolfCityWolfover 4 years ago
Too Nice

Being a sick fuck, I would have ended it differently. After passing out, she could have been taken outside to the lawn, where she is eventually woken by the police, who handcuff her and take her away for indecent exposure. Or even better, they make her streak home, leading to several humiliating experiences, particularly with people she knows, and THEN she's arrested and handcuffed. Naturally, she has to stand around cuffed and naked for some time before the vehicle comes to take her away. And you didn't even mention the impact on her life when all the photos and videos hit the internet.

debrardebrarover 4 years ago
Delivery job

Makes me wonder if I should "make ends meet" by taking a pizza delivery job... I wonder if I could make some good tips.

petitelilmynxpetitelilmynxover 4 years ago

https://literotica.com/s/red-box-pizza - probably the one you are looking for..

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More Please. Love the story

Please continue this. Its really hot. Liked how it ended. Hope to see more what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Found the story

It's "delivery", by attero. I have a copy at home. Unfortunately the account have been removed, and so were the stories. The Wayback machine has a copy of the author's page, but it didn't crawl all the way to the story itself…

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1377297&page=submissions

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

CityWolf, you are sick. Preferred your ending, tss. I liked that they at least gave her the cash she was promised (plus more, from the sound of it). This wasn't my usual cup of tea, but I kinda liked it. Hope the others found the story you're looking for

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I remember reading the original you mention (or one very like it), but I prefer yours. Keep writing, your stuff is great!

SissywithabeardSissywithabeardover 4 years ago

Please continue on this story please please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

For the original, use this link at Wayback - https://www.literotica.com/s/delivery-5

ThomasLordThomasLordabout 4 years ago
Well Written

I’m not usually a fan of non-consent stories but I did enjoy this one. Well written. I gave it 5*.

LancerCrownCTLancerCrownCTabout 4 years ago

I promised you that I would catch up on all of your writing. I read this story this morning. I am looking forward to finishing all of your stories so that we can chat again soon!

Wiz1002Wiz1002over 3 years ago

Meh!

A bit too much rape / NC for me to fully enjoy it, but glad I gave it a go

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Weird comments

"too much rape" says a person reading a story in the non-consent category...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I read this story on Swinglifestyle.com

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