by VANovice
I think this is a great start for this story. I know I would love to have that gift. Man would that be great. Keep it coming.
Baribrother
As the previous poster said, good start. Also, hot and well written. Hope more is coming soon.
Thanks.
Haven't seen a mind control device like this one before. I like it! I hope you will continue this plot line, it's very interesting. Imagine if a female office grabbed his wrist to arrest him?
More please.
Awesome idea for a story, keep it going. A little more build up for the "powers" to activate or so. It was a little confusing to just jump right into but still a pretty good story. Keep going