All Comments on 'Magic Hands Ch. 01'

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BaribrotherBaribrotheralmost 18 years ago
Great Start

I think this is a great start for this story. I know I would love to have that gift. Man would that be great. Keep it coming.

Baribrother

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good, Hot

As the previous poster said, good start. Also, hot and well written. Hope more is coming soon.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
mas por favor

more please...i love mind control stuff

ap2techap2techabout 11 years ago
Unusual

Haven't seen a mind control device like this one before. I like it! I hope you will continue this plot line, it's very interesting. Imagine if a female office grabbed his wrist to arrest him?

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

Awesome idea for a story, keep it going. A little more build up for the "powers" to activate or so. It was a little confusing to just jump right into but still a pretty good story. Keep going

Anonymous
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