All Comments on 'Magic Practice'

by msmilfmilk

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LlyanderLlyanderover 12 years ago
Good fun but...

It's "Rogue" not rouge. One is a sneaky thief sort, the other is something you put on your face. Sorry to nitpick but it was something I found really jarring in an otherwise very enjoyable story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
bullshit

And you can write in the discreation if the story is about lesbians not all people are gay

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
...

how about you read the tags next time?...

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