All Comments on 'Magical Essence Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very interesting so far

please post more soon..great story..can't wait for next chapter

sadnesssadnessover 16 years ago
it has been worth the wait

thank you for continuing the story. I'm looking forward to more chapters in this as well as your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Can't wait!

Hey Love the story... Can't wait for the next chapter....

ShayanielShayanielover 16 years ago
Hurray!

I knew it was worth creating a bookmark for your submission page and checking every now and then!

Good work, and please take your time writing the story, don't get caught in between school and hobby writing - everything would suffer that way.

Don't rush it, don't push it, use it as a relaxation for school, I know what I'm talking about (but then again don't get too distracted).

Beyond that, nice story, nice development, I like Estemere's character, even if I have some problems understanding some of the more detailed ways of your magic (the dualing the two did - 'he channeled his attacks trough his body, which surprised E., [but then was answered with equal attacks]' - did the older mage just reflect them where he launched his attacks from or what did happen there?

Cheers,

-Shaya

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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Where's the next chapter, hell just make it a book and Ill buy it.

aeg06aeg06about 15 years ago
we want to know what happens next

this is a great story we want you to continue on, please dont just leave us hanging.

eaglewolf1963eaglewolf1963almost 9 years ago
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Can't wait great story. Keep it up.

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