All Comments on 'Magnus and His Family Ch. 04'

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KalimaxosKalimaxosabout 4 years ago
You lost me...

The notion of a father turning his daughter in to a slut for coworkers ruined it for me.

I'm sure some people somewhere will keep reading this.

Shame. It was good while it lasted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Bad

It was so good for the first 3 chapters. It all ruined here. I did not finish reading it. And got very disappointed for all those other unwanted guys having sex with her. The father was already lucky to have incestuous sex with his daughter. Why on earth would he make her daugher a slut. And what stupid for the daughter to do it with those guys.

This supposed to be a good change for the husband and wife to be reunited and be together again as a family. And supposed to be an exciting incetuous family together with their children.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I STOPPED reading this story once the girl was being made into a fucking slut whore. That was the furthest from my mind when it was going good between dad and daughter, and mother and son. BUT THIS?!?!? Ruined the whole damn thing for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ugh. you ruined it with this. Why

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Hi! I'm Kathryn M. Burke. I've written about a dozen novels of love and sex, all published on Amazon (print and ebook). I'm really into unconventional relationships--polygamy, polyamory, intergenerational sex, etc. But I like to tell stories of people's feelings, not just thei...

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