All Comments on 'Mai Little Pet'

by Denarive_Rintner

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF

Where is the eroticism?

IRveaderIRveaderalmost 8 years ago
More Chapters?

I liked your story. Although, I would also like it if you could write more about the " unknown " old man and his continued domination of Mai, making her do all the dirty things she fantasies about, and more. (Maybe the old man has a domineering sister who can make Daisuke her own personal clit-licker. LoL.)

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